concept is working.typography is not.clean it up a lot first.once you've got it there, let's push it farther.for now, get rid of the price tags.choose your text font carefully.again, clean, simple, sans serif with even proportions and no gimmicky stuff.k?once you clean it up (headline also--try clarendon or ziggurat) we may be able to reintroduce the price tags.good?g
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concept is working.
typography is not.
clean it up a lot first.
once you've got it there, let's push it farther.
for now, get rid of the price tags.
choose your text font carefully.
again, clean, simple, sans serif with even proportions and no gimmicky stuff.
k?
once you clean it up (headline also--try clarendon or ziggurat) we may be able to reintroduce the price tags.
good?
g
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