yeah!great idea.really fun.and like the way you've laid it out, brought the dotted line across the number to tell us what borough, etc.layout is strong.typography not so strong.try a lot of fonts.i'm not talking three or four.but, many, many, many.probably be interesting to change up one of the elements to reflect the "character" of the borough.dunno which one yet.let's see a lot of swapping out of fonts for both the numbers and the stack of typography.lastly, you need a better color palette.but, keep to black and white for now.the type is enough to think about without mixing in color.g.
as far as the type, like gen suggested i'd love to see a different font (maybe somewhat characteristic of each borough) from one poster to the next..
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yeah!
great idea.
really fun.
and like the way you've laid it out, brought the dotted line across the number to tell us what borough, etc.
layout is strong.
typography not so strong.
try a lot of fonts.
i'm not talking three or four.
but, many, many, many.
probably be interesting to change up one of the elements to reflect the "character" of the borough.
dunno which one yet.
let's see a lot of swapping out of fonts for both the numbers and the stack of typography.
lastly, you need a better color palette.
but, keep to black and white for now.
the type is enough to think about without mixing in color.
g.
as far as the type, like gen suggested i'd love to see a different font (maybe somewhat characteristic of each borough) from one poster to the next..
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